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Sep. 30th, 2002 02:49 pmTitle: Space Pants
Author: Juliette Mercutio Torres
Series: Andromeda
Pairing: Dylan/Rhade
Spoilers: References to "Under the Night"
Thanks to:![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
kyrre, jcalanthe, and cadetdru.
Disclaimers: Andromeda belongs to Tribune. The phrase "Space Pants" apparently belongs to the Firefly fen.
Rating: Hmm. R for a handjob?
Also archived at AO3.
Notes:
This is a response to Andromerotica Festival Challenge Scenario #14: Sex without nudity (all clothes remain on). I feel I should say, me taking on a challenge was not a wise thing. I've never been good at staying in the lines, the box, the rules, the adage. Let me give you an example.
When I was seven years old, they were teaching us in school how to compose various different types of writing: action, character, narrative, how-to, description. For one description assigment, we were shown a picture of a mouse in front of an easel, drawing something. We had to fill two pages talking about this. Now, while most of the class was asking itself, how can I show my reader this image, I was asking myself, why is a mouse drawing something?
I drew on my extensive knowledge of mice (Tom and Jerry) and constructed a tale of a mouse diagramming a complex machine full of levers, pulleys, garage door openers and tabasco sauce, which would rid the world of cats. The mouse went on to build and utilize this machine, terrorizing hundreds of felines. It wasn't all description. But it *contained* description.
The teacher wrote "F--an action story, not description" in red cursive on it. I was required to peform a remedial descriptive task.
My Andromerotica story, written to fulfill the challenge "Sex with clothes on," very quickly ceased to be about the pants, or even the smut. It turned into a story that was mostly about the dynamic between Dylan and Rhade, how they talked to each other and why they were with each other. It's not all sex with clothes on. But it *contains* sex with clothes on.
I guess that some part of me expectsmaryavatar to come back and rate it "F--a narrative, not a PWP" and assign me a remedial smut challenge.
That having been said, if you're still interested, ( Read more... )
Author: Juliette Mercutio Torres
Series: Andromeda
Pairing: Dylan/Rhade
Spoilers: References to "Under the Night"
Thanks to:
kyrre, jcalanthe, and cadetdru. Disclaimers: Andromeda belongs to Tribune. The phrase "Space Pants" apparently belongs to the Firefly fen.
Rating: Hmm. R for a handjob?
Also archived at AO3.
Notes:
This is a response to Andromerotica Festival Challenge Scenario #14: Sex without nudity (all clothes remain on). I feel I should say, me taking on a challenge was not a wise thing. I've never been good at staying in the lines, the box, the rules, the adage. Let me give you an example.
When I was seven years old, they were teaching us in school how to compose various different types of writing: action, character, narrative, how-to, description. For one description assigment, we were shown a picture of a mouse in front of an easel, drawing something. We had to fill two pages talking about this. Now, while most of the class was asking itself, how can I show my reader this image, I was asking myself, why is a mouse drawing something?
I drew on my extensive knowledge of mice (Tom and Jerry) and constructed a tale of a mouse diagramming a complex machine full of levers, pulleys, garage door openers and tabasco sauce, which would rid the world of cats. The mouse went on to build and utilize this machine, terrorizing hundreds of felines. It wasn't all description. But it *contained* description.
The teacher wrote "F--an action story, not description" in red cursive on it. I was required to peform a remedial descriptive task.
My Andromerotica story, written to fulfill the challenge "Sex with clothes on," very quickly ceased to be about the pants, or even the smut. It turned into a story that was mostly about the dynamic between Dylan and Rhade, how they talked to each other and why they were with each other. It's not all sex with clothes on. But it *contains* sex with clothes on.
I guess that some part of me expects
maryavatar to come back and rate it "F--a narrative, not a PWP" and assign me a remedial smut challenge.That having been said, if you're still interested, ( Read more... )
