Well, it cut off rather abruptly at the end mid-syllable but I don't think that's what you meant. I would say from a strictly musical construction point the sort of bridge shift at 0:55 "You know that I want you" comes early, but I think it all sounds fairly seamless.

FYI this is the second time I have heard this song - the first is that sionnain just made a Hard Core Logo vid a few days ago to this song, and one of my comments was that I thought she should have cut the song because it was way too long. :-)

PSFYI, I don't like this song at all.