ext_1716 ([identity profile] delurker.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jmtorres 2005-09-02 11:22 am (UTC)

Wow, this is so creepily good. I particularly liked this bit: growing into something that pretends to be a baby but is not, something that will grow up to be lethal. It perfectly encapsulates the creepiness, but in a restrained way, so it leaves space for the horror.
It's disturbingly plausible. And probably the baby wraith eat their way out.
The ending works really well, too.

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