jmtorres.livejournal.com ([identity profile] jmtorres.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jmtorres 2007-05-14 03:25 am (UTC)

Small fandom it may be, this story is awesome.

Hee! "small fandom" places a limiting factor on the quantity of feedback, but demonstrably not the quality!

the last section--the friction of distance and gravity and push factors--is possibly the most awesome of all.

*grins* When contemplating the question "what does this story need more of?" I inevitably answered it, "More math."

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting